Some Roses

Some Roses

A Poem by MsJewel
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for my lovely daughter

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Some roses are so lovely

they see you smile…

 

petals dance

                on a lullaby

the joy of a songbird’s melody

high up in the trees

 

As graceful as the wind stirring your hair

weaving golden threads to catch the beauty of the day

             the light that is you

 

First in my love, my strength, my happiness….

 

In times of struggle, I look to you as I would an indigo dream

of endless skies and warm spring days

and birds that sing with lifted voice

 

as poetry finds my heart again

 

and I think

some roses are so lovely


© 2020 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art by Garmash
poetry by MsJewel

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Even before I got to the line that mentions it, I was hearing birds chirping and seeing the plants and flowers gently sway in the breeze.
This is why poetry exists, to fully convey feelings bursting from a heart.
I'm sure these words will be a future treasure to that child, all grown.
Beautifully penned.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie



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I love the way your mind entwines words to the page! It is as lovely and intricate as the art work paired with it. You have a way of painting with words that I have not read any where else. Well done my friend! You are very talented and a joy to read! “Some roses are so lovely!”

Posted 1 Month Ago


What a heart whelming write! The way you infused someone’s beauty with the beauty of nature itself is so down to earth. We are all part of nature, but some of us overpower mother nature's beauty with their own stunning existence, some complete it and some make more beautiful. Thank you for sharing this extraordinary poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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It's strange how we find ourselves in a strange place when we examine normal things... there is no path it's just a lovely forest. The more I age the more I realize how little I truly know about the nature of things going on around me. (which is actually the normal state of being).... confusion.

One of the most common traits of being an honest human being is, without a doubt... confusion. If the world makes sense to you, it's probably because you haven't learned enough to be confused yet, or, you're lying.

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is absolutely Beautiful. A keepsake that should be wrapped within a frame. The sentiments and the imagery are heartwarming. So pure and loving. Simply Stunning..


Posted 2 Months Ago


This was such a wonderful poem to read. I could picture everything so vividly and feel the emotions behind your words. Thank you for sharing this

Posted 2 Months Ago


More than beautiful, more than sincere, couldn't be more loving: wonderful poetry. Nuff said, but, meant.

Take care, keep safe.

Posted 2 Months Ago


This was so beautiful to read...

Posted 2 Months Ago


When the poet's imagery complements or tops the artwork, she has succeeded in hooking the reader. You certainly did that here. The colors, aroma, texture of nature came through the screen. And, there's something special that happens when we write for a loved one, especially a child. It's a sincerity you captured so well here. Exceptional work in all aspects.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Oh wow, This is so good and lovely, full of feelings. Love the picture that you used as well.
Awesome write....

Posted 4 Months Ago


Even before I got to the line that mentions it, I was hearing birds chirping and seeing the plants and flowers gently sway in the breeze.
This is why poetry exists, to fully convey feelings bursting from a heart.
I'm sure these words will be a future treasure to that child, all grown.
Beautifully penned.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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