Yesterday's Rain

Yesterday's Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
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Memories

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                        You knew me by heart

                                                            and I loved you first

 

                        You touched me in the dark

                                    no sun,

                                                 moon,

                                                            nor starlight was needed

                        your eyes were covered with my words

                        my dreams with your fantasy

                        on a pillow, scented with desire

                        you found the place

                                                where winds rise

                                   and flowers burn…

 

                        Your love rained upon me

                                                silk to my skin

                        I caught every raindrop

                                    selfishly

                                                quenching my thirst

             

                        Touch me...

                                                like yesterday’s rain

                        and let the winds stir

                        as we recite each other’s poetry

                        and I will feel you

                        deep in my soul as you move me

 

                        I am free

                        I am a goddess

                        I run through a garden of flowers

                                    passion blooming grace

                        and you will remember…

 

                        You knew me by heart

                                                             and I loved you first

© 2024 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Photography - Amanda Diaz
Poetry - MsJewel

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Wow, just wow. This speaks to me in ways only you and l know. Your poetry says so much, hidden in the lines and spoken with your words
I miss the rain, and l have always held your heart in a safe place.

Love, love ❤️ love this poem. It feels like it was written specially for me.

Huggs, Trace

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you my sweet beast. Your reviews always make my day. Hugs, Julie



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Raining with flowers soft as promises where love becomes orchestrated crescendoes of Mozart synphonies softly, Pat

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


allow me to add my praise to all the others for this poem, Julie. It's remarkable for its sensual feel and romantic flow. And then there is this: "Touch me... like yesterday's rain", 'sigh'!!!
Curt

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind words Curt. :) Julie
Sensual and sensuous. Excellent work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind comment :) Julie
Oh my heart, I enjoyed reading this very romantic poem. The picture goes well with the title and yours words.. A very sweet poem. I loved the very first 2 lines and the last set. It says so much in just a few lines.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Beautiful, gentle and kind words for love my dear fiend. I loved the feel of joy and happiness for the emotion of love kindness. The complete poem was so good. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


MsJewel

1 Month Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you. :) Julie
I absolutely loved this work. What a strong and romantic piece. Love creates wonderful art.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
A very beautiful sensual write complemented by a stunning graphic. I love the repetition of the first two lines as the final two lines in the poem. Lovely work, Julie. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for the wonderful comment. :) Julie
Marie

1 Month Ago

Most welcome, Julie...
Stunning words, love that has vitality and sincerity as if the one and only touch and feel of it. Beautiful and - perhaps because rain suggests tears of joy and purity?

'Touch me... like yesterday’s rain - and let the winds stir - as we recite each other’s poetry - and I will feel you deep in my soul as you move me '

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Wow! I like this gem and the cascading, free flowing style.
Love blooms in passion, ripens by season and is etched by experience.
You mesmerize us indeed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

You are so kind Sami. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are welcome
This is so good this gossamer love story.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Month Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Ken. Thank you. :) Julie

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Added on October 2, 2024
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