Where Do I Fit In The Picture

Where Do I Fit In The Picture

A Poem by Junert
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Getting first and losing love.

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Well it looks like you finally made the front page
You always did look good in white
And I hope you like the ring ofyour new name
The one you'll be given tonight
But all of this is news to me
I wondered why you never called
I guess that's the way that it's meant to be
If you're gonna ride you've gatta learn to fall
But...
Where do I fit in the picture
Or do I really fit at all
Or have I become a fixture
On an old forgotten wall
Well it looks like I finally made the front page
You know you always said I would
And things are well here in room 28
God I hope you're doin' good
There's a picture in my wallet that I look at sometimes
It sends chills through my bones
For long lost love or whatever you wanna call it
Whoa, but it left me all alone
Where do I fit in the picture
Or do I really fit at all
Or have I become a fixture
On an old forgotten wall
On an old forgotten wall

© 2013 Junert


Author's Note

Junert
Well I don't write poems so anytime you see a poem by Junert, it's a lyrics. This is by Clay Walker.

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Well said... in the lines of this verse... I can heard a melody as a reader... a longing cry of the departed... and like the usage of the repeating stanza...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Junert

10 Years Ago

Glad you like it.
I had to re-read it over when your note said it was a lyrics...fully grasped it's meaning,

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

enjoyed this, understand it to be a song....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Junert

11 Years Ago

Yeah it is. Thanks.
Oh, I see but it was a great one and I really appreciated it already after reading it (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Lovely! It just reads like a really beautiful heartbreak song. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it... Though, I believe that you CAN write poems... I'm sure of it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Junert

11 Years Ago

Well thank you, I believe I can too except I prefer stories.
Good poem here, I would have shortened up some lines, and .... I just realized you didn't write this, lol!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Junert

11 Years Ago

Lol, yeah
This is hot! This would be nice as a song. Anyone and everyone can relate to this feeling. Nice piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Junert

11 Years Ago

Thank you. And it is a song by Clay Walker.
Sounds like a great song!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Junert

11 Years Ago

Yeah it is.

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Added on February 19, 2013
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Junert
Junert

Tema, Greater Accra, Ghana



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