A New Optimism

A New Optimism

A Poem by Jurikosan

A fire inside that burns me.
A deep and intense soul.
I don't flaunt it off like a style, you see.
My life is in a dark hole.

I've been taunted and fooled with
And caused so much pain
I made enough tears to hydrate a country
Oh the countless times I've been played...

That is how I used to think! 
Before I became so alive
I found a friend! I sucked the pain in!
And now I've made this life mine.

I smile so much
and I do lots of pranks!!
I act like a fool! 
I break the rules!
The sadness gave me a break!

© 2011 Jurikosan


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It is always good to find a good friend that can share in the smiles and be there when you need a pick me up, or to offer a shoulder when the tears need to fall.

This is a wonderful uplifting poem. It's nice to see the positive energy and the smiles that come from the ink.

Great Poem!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jurikosan
Jurikosan

Little Rock, AR



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Hey! My name is Hayley, but you can call me Jurisan! I'm nearly fifteen years old. I wrote most of these poems when I was eleven, and I can't really write anymore... I swear I got dumber over the year.. more..

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