When The Soilders Came Home (revisted)

When The Soilders Came Home (revisted)

A Poem by Face In A Crowd

It's revisting day! So enjoy~

They all went out to say hi,
When the soldiers came home,
But he sat alone confused and upset,
Because Daddy didn't come home.

They all cried, and hugged, and kissed,
When the soldiers came home,
Thoughts rand through his mind,
About why Daddy wasn't home.

Everyone cried tears of joy,
When the soldiers came home,
He tried not to cry out of sadness,
But he felt weak since Daddy didn't come home.

Mommy sighed and said be happy,
When the soldiers came home
He wondered what he had to be happy for
Daddy had promised he'd come home

But Daddy wasn't coming home.
And all the boy could do was cry.
Daddy broke his promise.

When the soldiers came home.

© 2008 Face In A Crowd

Author's Note

Face In A Crowd
So you let me know what you think of the revisit. Oh and about the picture! We'll say that's the path the Soldier's came home on.

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One of the sad results of war...those who don't come home. Even sadder is the loved ones left behind.
Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Great! This was a very good move. You're doing great...keep it up!

Posted 16 Years Ago

I like it very much! Its very descriptive, but yet sad.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on July 12, 2008


Face In A Crowd
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I guess I write many multiple stories. The story I'm writing now I had the idea for and shared with my friends. They wanted to be in it so I let them in! But I drifted away from the idea. But I guess .. more..


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