I Am Blue

I Am Blue

A Poem by Anna
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A silly poem, really cliché, not too serious.

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I Am Blue

 

I am blue,

The rain drips slowly, silently, down my broken glass

As the waves crash viciously on our abandoned beach,

Blueberries turn sour, Time passes the hour,

And all I can think is I am blue.

 

Forget-me-knots; Forget me now,

Wilt and wither,

As I watch how,

The flakes are destroyed,

From a snow plow.

And all I can think is I am blue.

 

The sky is darkened,

the wind thrashes my face,

I trip and falter,

There's nothing to chase.

And all I can think is I am blue.

 

I miss you,

like grass missing dew,

When I was me, and you were you.

And together we were never blue.

And all I can think is,

I am blue without you.

© 2013 Anna


Author's Note

Anna
Colors are wonderful things, Please review!

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This is a lovely representation of the color blue in all forms of meaning, whether abstract or tangible. Forget-me-nots are truly wonderful flowers in their bright blue forms. I have seen them since I ae to study them as a biologist. Ending the poem in romance is quite a good catch to the attention of the reader though a loss has been observed here. Wonderful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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colors go the way u feel and interpret them-beautiful !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

thank you a lot :)
This is a lovely representation of the color blue in all forms of meaning, whether abstract or tangible. Forget-me-nots are truly wonderful flowers in their bright blue forms. I have seen them since I ae to study them as a biologist. Ending the poem in romance is quite a good catch to the attention of the reader though a loss has been observed here. Wonderful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
colors can mean so many things. Like blue. Or like red. Red can mean action, blood, desire, love. But in no way is red calm. Blue however, is almost always calm. It's the ocean, the rain, the snow, sadness, calming. Colors can mean many things, and you captured all of blue in this poem. Congratulations! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
it's a song, right?

Well if it isn't it should be

simple yet compelling

great

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

Ha..You must have heard me try to sing....Joni Mitchell I am not
Anna

11 Years Ago

Joni Mitchell Blue, that's creative :) Haha quite witty!
Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

Great album too
excellent! I see a change in your writing, a good change :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

I'm glad to hear that, thank you :)
loved the imagery. you did a very good job of creating a picture. Your use of the color blue the fixation somehow it really sets a mood and causes the rest of the poem to flow this was very well done well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Aw thank you :)
Very excellent imagery and excellent symbolism through out the whole piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
nice one , i like blue too :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Haha :)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

;)
I completely agree with the fact that colors are wonderful things. My new watch is yellow and my broken one is lime green. There are so many things better then color but colors represent a lot of things. Emotions, a desire for a brighter world. Colors hold a mystery that is undeniable. Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much :) And that's cool!
Great poem! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anna

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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