Three for Three

Three for Three

A Poem by Just Plain Me
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The title is because so far I'm 3/3 for cheating, lying, a******s.

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The dreams are gone,
nothing will get them back.
Once a love thought to be so strong,
who knew I was going to be so wrong?

I thought he was my best friend,
he would never stoop so low.
I should know by now that my heart is too blackened,
yet sadly, my patheticness hasn't slackened.

The illusions have been shattered,
they'll never be able to be fixed.
I still fall for the same old tricks,
who knew there were so many pricks?

© 2012 Just Plain Me


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What are the things that catch you off guard and allow them to real you in, so they turn out so bad? I've been on the loosing end of relationships, but usually I end them because of disatisfaction, almost never heart break. I'd love to know what other's have had to deal with. =)
Your poem is reaaly well done. It brings out alot of emotional scenes that are probably very relatable.

Kate


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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I love the last two lines of this. So unashamedly blunt, and oh so true. Very nice piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Oh God: Amen to that! Been there - tore up the t-shirt.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Just Plain Me

6 Years Ago

I was pregnant and pissed about some pictures I found in an email...so yeah... lol
What are the things that catch you off guard and allow them to real you in, so they turn out so bad? I've been on the loosing end of relationships, but usually I end them because of disatisfaction, almost never heart break. I'd love to know what other's have had to deal with. =)
Your poem is reaaly well done. It brings out alot of emotional scenes that are probably very relatable.

Kate


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You always had a good eye for words this is a great poem! Hopefully the next one you post isn't so sad tho

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Just Plain Me
Just Plain Me

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