Tear Stained Letter

Bleh

Another promise,
   another scar.
Another year wondering where you are.
   I wrote a tear stained letter for you,
      put in a box like I always do.

When you coming home?
    when you gonna be grown?
When will you realize I've always been alone?
   I wrote a tear stained letter today,
      saying exactly what I needed to say.

A tear to shed,
  a heart that's yours to shatter.
A day in my life that won't really matter.
   I wrote a tear stained letter,
     closed my eyes and wished next year will be better.

Author's Note

Popped in my head after Christmas with my dad...I like it, so bleh

Reviews

[Nobody.]

I like it. It flows very well and the content is quite touching.
Cheers!
R.G.

[Michelle Lea]

Loved it!
It reminds me of a song I wrote but it is called love letters. Nicely written, unique flow and wonderful usage of words. Made my eyes water up with tears. Thanks for sharing, keep writing! (:

[Annie29]

This is amazing.
Made me cry even.
Keep up the good work girl!

[MiidniightSoul]

A beautiful written poem. Emotional and very deep. Very well written. You did a wonderful job.

[how.girls.get.clean]

really beautiful!! probably one of the best poems on this site :)

[nono]

OH! This is just beautiful! You did a fantastic job on it!! Really well written, and I'm at lose for words. Its well detailed. Keep up the great work!

[cfix]

I like this it's deep and so emotional.
Very poetic as well. Nicely done and written.

[Star Bright]

I like it! I like how it flows and the message it's sending. To me it's saying,"I'm worried about you. When are you going to worry about me?" That's just my opinion though. Keep writing! (: