A face that looks familiar

A face that looks familiar

The fragrance felt before, as you come closer

 

Reminds me of the full moon night,

And the beach glittering.

You  touched me for the first time,

And I felt like a virgin. 

 

Looks like shadows of the past,

But im not sure if they will  last, 

Coz as I learn the world & as I learn to tame,

I understand your logics & I understand the game.

 

Met you after a while…

You speak too much,

And you speak too loud.

Just feels like you are part of the crowd….

Reviews

[Rayne Stanton]

Sounds great :) but you should perhaps double check your spell check from time to time. Your stanzas are also beautiful, but pauses are also very helpful when describing emotions.