Loving You.

Loving You.

A Poem by Jvonne

We met by chance,

And became lovers by choice.

I’ll still remember our first kiss,

Long after you’ve forgotten our last.

 

I stay awake to watch you sleep,

Lingering in the aftermath of your touch.

The moon and its mistress watch in anticipation

As I smoulder in the heated bliss that is you.

 

Your touch burns with desire

And I hear you whisper

“never mind the darkness love,

that’s where the stars shine brightest”

 

Our emotions take motion

plunging to depths I have never known

we become one, I melt in the ecstasy of your embrace

and I lose myself in the adventure of loving you..

 

© 2012 Jvonne


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EMF
I will be brutally honest. When I saw the stock photo I thought 'oh Bugger. Erotic drivel'. Based upon the ammount of erotic writers who use stock photo's to titilate.

Miss. I am a moron.

I am a moron, because, had I followed my original impulse to move onto another poem of yours I would have missed a truly beautiful and heart lifting poem. I am a moron, for not engaging from the very start with the sheer love that shines through every line of this work. I am a moron for nearly missing another truly wonderful work.

Not only is it a wonderful poem of love, it is an exceptionally well written poem of love. Rarer than you might think. It is very difficult to sum up a moment, more so to encapsulate an emotion. You have done both. Superb work. You are a gifted artist.

I am still a moron, but learning

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Jvonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you. You are right about the image I decided to use though. But I guess we are both still le.. read more
EMF

7 Years Ago

On reflection, the image does work. The problem is not your use, but the overuse by second rate ero.. read more



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Just found this. Favourite line “never mind the darkness love, thats where stars shine the brightest”. Im not a big fan about the overused topic of love. But this was beautifully worded

Posted 11 Months Ago


Jvonne

11 Months Ago

Thank you Anne!
“never mind the darkness love,
that’s where the stars shine brightest”

sets the pace of this write...
the emotion and desire...
makes for an evening...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loved it..
I felt love and I liked it;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


aww this is super sweet :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


"I lose myself in the adventure of loving you."
A love affair is an adventure, we hit all the high spots
in loving. Then finally our love passes on and we reach
the bottom. In the interim we are flung about by the
winds of passion, longing, lust and deceit.
Your poem says it all. Great writing.
Yes, lose the stock photo.

---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sensual, erotic and passionate. The poem is very coherent and free flowing, each line just leads to others. Enjoyed reading it.
Specially the part where you say....''“never mind the darkness love,
that’s where the stars shine brightest”
And i also love the way you ended it. Yeah love is an endless adventure and ecstasy.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Vivid and compelling. I could almost feel my breat quicken and slow as I read. Thanks from sharing.



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Ees
Awesome
hot
deep
powerful poem.
I just adore the second stanza, I can imagine watching someone sleep, just to bathe in the reality of their presence and love. This was really wonderfully written.
I enjoyed the idea that the romance would be an adventure, and the way that you wrote this I can see a moment at night, watching him sleep at the same time that I gain perspective on what you are feeling throughout the thing.
Fantastic job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Two souls blending as one through love... glorious love. This is a wonderful poem. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I fell in to this too early, so,;
Chance ,choice,kiss,last,
Sleep, touch,anticipation, you.
Desire, whisper,love,brightest.
Motion, known, embrace, you.....

The last words of you. join the adventure.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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