The need to hide (part 1)

The need to hide (part 1)

A Story by Bigdreams

A small part of writing.

It was 4:30 AM and I was lying down on the roof floor staring at the sky.
It wasn't quiet at all , 
it was exactly what I needed to hear at that moment.
The sound of the sea waves splashing and getting all over the sand ,and my 
mind too. 
It was indeed what I loved hearing the most or at least at that moment.
I realized that my mind gets more peaceful as nature's noises get louder,
It's what calms me down the most.
As I was looking up ,the starry night was starting to fade as a pink-yellowish color 
started to break in the darkness of the sky,and it wasn't that dark anymore. The sun was starting to rise and it was making sure to do it slowly ,maybe teasing us a bit,while giving us beautiful mixed colors as small pretty hints. It was overwhelming.

I stood up to get a clearer view. Man my body's so tired ,I mean, of course it is ,I haven't slept in two days .. if only my mind was as tired as my body I would have 
more energy ,but I wouldn't be witnessing this beautiful view too.

Enough complaining. I gotta stop now. 
I finally have a gorgeous distraction to get my mind off of everything.
Everything that's been bothering me.
Everything that's been keeping me down. 
Everything that's been sucking my optimism. 
It's been too much lately ,
I'm not sure why. But here I am. 
Getting away from everything for a while. 
I had the chance to leave the city for a while and get here.
Finally some rest from all that crap that was way too much and ..

Oh my god ..
My mind's doing it again ,isn't it ? 
Gosh I needed a break and I had it now what's the problem? 
What's my problem ?
Is it my mind that's keeping me from enjoying this moment ?
Why am I speaking about it as if it's another person's mind ?..
What the hell is wrong with me?

Okay , I gotta stop now or else I'll get even more confused 
*sighs and smiles* Silly me , I'm exactly where I wanna be.
I'll let myself breathe a little now or I'll miss the stunning sunrise ..

© 2016 Bigdreams

Author's Note

Maybe I'll write another parts if people loved it ,please tell me what you think:)

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I liked your story. The only thing is a couple small grammar mistakes. Other then that your doing well. Good job, keep it up! Try reading my poem, and tell me what you think if you could.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Thank you:) But could you please tell me what my grammar mistakes are ? I really wanna make it bette.. read more

4 Years Ago

Alright so, at your first paragraph, in the sentence the sound of the sea waves splashing, replace t.. read more

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much , I'll try to adjust the commas :)

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Added on June 26, 2016
Last Updated on June 28, 2016
Tags: Escape, hide, love, self, sky, nature, sun, starry, night, sea, sand



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