The Breeze

The Breeze

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze

She shivered with envy
when the breeze touched his naked skin..

He got Goosebumps
seeing her quiver in the rain.

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


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Jyoti_Ablaze
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I felt it myself, nice job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you! This encourages a lot.
You make words dance to life through the cold breeze and envy's ever-reaching grasp. So well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Awe! Thank you so much!
Intense imagery in this fine brevity! Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you..!
Indra Neil

4 Years Ago

u r welcome!
Ohhh really you are a romantic personality, no doubt

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome..........
i absolutely loved it!!!
:)
you should try senryus/haikus..........go here:
http://www.howmanysyllables.com/poetry/haiku

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Okay Sure thing!
Pushkar Prabhat

4 Years Ago

all the best!!! :) :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you!

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