I feel you

I feel you

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze








When the glistening sunlight showers its warmth

I feel you embracing me,

When I see a shooting star leaving its trail on the sky

I see you descending for me.

 

When the mighty stars’ light penetrates through the cloud

I feel you twinkling above,

When a fresh morning breeze teases me with its charm

I discern your good wishes for me.

 

When I pass a playground and hear a child’s laughter

Nostalgia of our time grips me,

When the magical droplets of rain shimmer and dance

I feel you smiling and blessing me!

 

 

© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze


Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
It is said that death can only touch the body and not the soul.

So this piece is penned in the memories of my late father.
Miss you, Papa!

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What a beautiful piece to remember you father by. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even before I read your 'Author's note', I knew it was all about the gratitude and nostalgia. Little imagery lives up to the mighty feelings in this write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can totally relate to it..the grief once that almost destroyed me as my father left, is now replaced with calmness of the mind on knowing that it was not the end..it was just a chain of even that will lead him to ensure a one step towards immortality..good piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Sorry to hear about your dad.
And thank you for the kind words.
Thanks for sharing this .sorry to hear about your father. Poems help us express our feelings so we can recover or at least begin to heal.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Yes they do.
Thank you for stopping by
He 'll always be there with u... nd his blessings would always be showered upon u forever

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Abhishek for your kind words.
People leave this world only to be with their beloved ones for ever. We feel them always around us everywhere..
Very nicely written feel....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Bala, thank you for your kind words.
Jyoti Ablaze
A lovely epitaph. Your heavenly connections were comforting. I know that death is unavoidable. Memories can come from and be pulled from so many places and given lovely form just as you have done here. Very moving! ....................Kathy

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Indeed Kathy!
Thank you for your kind words.
Your words and expressions are at it is best! Truly, a lovely piece of work. I am sure wherever he is, he is looking at you and smiling. May he rest in peace and may his blessings help you live through your life. A beautiful life. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Fahmida!
This is a very wonderful piece. It a great tribute to your father. He would be proud of it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Lord of mad men

3 Years Ago

No need to thank me it was my pleasure.
Very good tribute to your dad... I am sure he'd be proud of you... Very good words used... I liked the title along with your thoughts... was a pleasure reading...
Anindita : )

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Anindita.
Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

you're welcome my dear....

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