Darkness (10-Words)

Darkness (10-Words)

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze
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Bleeding words..

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Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.





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I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful words.



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a very intelligent use of such powerful words to convey such a deep meaning...gr8 work

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words.
a profound quote! so much conveyed in so few words!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your kind visit.
Indra Neil

4 Years Ago

you are welcome!
This reads like a Rumi quote. It sits there, an universal truth, for people to read and digest, in any way you can possibly. However, it is a such a large concept that you keep coming back to it. Nicely done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, JayeeC. Means a lot, coming from you.
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so much said with not so many words

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
Great! You said a lot with a few words. Compliments.
Salvatore

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words.
The poem told the truth. You told a complete story in so few words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I would like to know what led you to write these words, since it it open to interpretation.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Just the very nature of sadness and how it makes the nights more bearable than waking hours.
.. read more
why r all ur 10 w poems SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO genuinely EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCC????????????????///

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Khatoon but this is my only 10 words poem. :D
i want more time to realize and feel more and more this line...
bcz its not an ordinary line Miss Jyoti.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Imran. This line is written with the hope for open for interpretation.
I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful words.

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