Darkness (10-Words)

Darkness (10-Words)

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze
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Bleeding words..

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Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.





© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze


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I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful words.



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Philosophical wisdom and frightening all because of it's accuracy, well done my friend :~)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Bear. It means a lot!
Awesome use of 10 words, and love the image with it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it!
and your shadow is free to do whatever it pleases....great 10 words!!:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

An awesome twist to the piece!
Thank you very much Terry!
I love it...amazing :)))

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Zaisha!
zaisham9393

4 Years Ago

you're welcome!
love it! compact and striking in statement .. your statement "bleeding words" adds to it
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much E! :)
When day becomes darker than night, it means that the sun became black, and life without the sun is no life at all cause the light is what makes the world safe and flowers blossom. Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

You got this just bang on!
Thank you for your insightful review.
Insight

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Nice one... It's good to write such 10-words which define a lot.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Amay Saxena

4 Years Ago

You're welcome girl!!
sometimes! yeah, right! great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is so true. Great job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
Nice 10 words. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you.

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