Twinkling Star

Twinkling Star

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze







Twinkle, twinkle little star

marred with scars of love and war

you shine when the world is sleeping tight

like a ray of hope guiding through the night

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

witnessing my euphoria and despair

you are like an oasis in the barren sky

bravely, holding your ground up so high

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

marred with scars of love and war

you blink and wink while I gaze

bring the new moon, spellbound in daze

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

I stoically wait, from afar

for you to soothingly touch my soul,

rejuvenate my body, make me whole





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© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
Star gazing..
Thank you for your time!

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i so agree ...gazing at the night sky is mesmerizing ... takes the breath away when the moon and stars declare themselves ... all we can do is drink them in ... and when clouds obscure it all ..i can not help but feel disappointed :( i think the repetition of the first two lines is a good idea ..those lines for me are strong. there is something to be said for having gone through the scars ... and survived without malice ... i think this is a tight poem reflective of life at a fine stage!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, E for your insights! Love to have them!
You changed it all together!! but a very good write....trust me it looks better than that "Twinkle twinkle little star".... enjoyed it... lovely write really

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
i liked the nursery rhyme line ...... u used in the poem... awesome poem created out of it..keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
nupur chauhan

8 Years Ago

urs most welcome
Just Fabulous..! Sounds so smooth in Rhyme And Bless peace.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
*heart drops* this is unique! Gorgeous! Actually! *hearts pumping* I wished I could say more about it- Darling. Your writing style is adorable *smiles* (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I really like the last grouping. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
We always grasp for what is not always so easy to old. Ever the dreamer, we cast our gaze afar, hoping to obtain that which will make us whole. The wish is always there, and there is always a star. Very pretty.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Linda for your beautiful insights.
Beautiful..I went in my childhood...nicely penned dear Jyoti..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Randhir kaur

8 Years Ago

U r most welcome..
I loved it!
One of my new favorites of yours!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Emily!
Hmmm... star gazing. Very peaceful albiet bittersweet poem dear Jyoti. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you Andrea

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