Twinkling Star

Twinkle, twinkle little star

marred with scars of love and war

you shine when the world is sleeping tight

like a ray of hope guiding through the night

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

witnessing my euphoria and despair

you are like an oasis in the barren sky

bravely, holding your ground up so high

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

marred with scars of love and war

you blink and wink while I gaze

bring the new moon, spellbound in daze

 

Twinkle, twinkle little star

I stoically wait, from afar

for you to soothingly touch my soul,

rejuvenate my body, make me whole

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Author's Note

Star gazing..
Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Very nice. When we wish upon a star, amazing things can and will happen. Sometimes we are too impatient though and don't want to play the waiting game. Love the picture too.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Melissa! Stars tend to provide the solace we need sometimes...

[MelissaAndres]

Very true!

[3X3MPLER]

great work...watch my fIlm please www.m.youtube.com/watch?v=jL6Wo9DjPaQ

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I surely will. Thank you!

[Jerry Martin]

fantastically framed! penned with depths of cute innocent onyx eyes and heights of despair and resentment! Could feel i am a part of it..
Roger madam (y)
You are as amazing as always.. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Jerry for your beautiful insights!

[Mary Helda]

Wonderful write dear poet...i wish it could make us whole again..we all need that..beautifully penned..abit of it reminds me of kindergaten

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Mary!
Well I came up with this during a boring lecture... maybe in the reminisce of my childhood days..

[Mary Helda]

well yes,,you are welcome:-)

[Willard Wells]

One of your best works I think. Very nice flow and a great concept for a poem. Very well done. I like it a great deal.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh thank you very much, Mr Wells, for your compliment!
I am glad you liked it!

[wordman]

if only that could happen,but maybe it can !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes maybe... We will have to reach out a bit then.
Thank you for reading this!

[wordman]

it was my pleasure