Finding herself

Finding herself

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze





Jiggling down the lane, she laughs

She laughs so hard that she cries

 

Running down the lane, she falls 

She falls so hard that she flies

 

Stumbling across it, she finds

Finds something deep, she loses

 

 Desperate for breath, she binds

She binds so tight that she frees

 

As a free spirit she rise

Rises so sure that nothing defies.







 

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


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Jyoti_Ablaze
Thank you for your time!

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I guess there is a message you put here..
What is it ??
"Everything we try can end in an unexpected result" or "At the end of all we break our bounds and become free" ....
Or something I couldn't understand at all ...??

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

You came close to it both of your speculations. Its okay to fall and rise, but what's important is t.. read more
Shuvadip Mallik

5 Years Ago

Ah ! Now I get it,, thanks for simplifying .. :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Its a pleasure!
Very inspirational and uplifting. Good form and substance...:)..............

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sami, its encouraging.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....:)))))
Loved how you structured this write. A motivational write.

Keep writing. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Motivational.................

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you..!
lovely creation...inspiring...:))

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
This somehow triggered a random melody in my head, almost like it's a piece of a song. However, you don't need any help from instruments to make this piece moving. Really like it, and I like the melodic structure of it. Bravo.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you Omikron for the kind visit and review.
i really love the rhymes of your work ... it just kept me reading
very niece piece of work

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you Zunie!
zunie frost

5 Years Ago

welcome !!!
Yet another wonderful poem Jyoti! :) Sometimes success is just one step away from failure. Keep writing, keep smiling. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you dear Andrea! Your review has made me smile. Thank you.
awesome..........
sometimes all you need to ascent is a fall.......
loved it!!!
:)


Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Indeed. Thank you.
This is so lovely and I like your flow...great piece of poetry...keep writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Years Ago

Thank you Meshalini. Happy that you kindly visited and reviewed.
Meshalini

5 Years Ago

Your welcome....

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