It's never too late

It's never too late

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze

© 2017 Jyoti_Ablaze


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Jyoti_Ablaze
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Thankyou soo much for writing and sharing this!
So sweet of him :D
A Wonderful imagination you have Jyoti
An Outstanding piece :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Pragati, for your kind words.
I agree dear Poet. Your words, kind and sweet. A worthwhile poem to read. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
As usual, carved out the shine from stone.. one more gem to the treasure! :) #AsAweaomeAsAlways.. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jerry, for your kind words.
Liked it............................................
Nyc swing.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

thank you!
Quite a tender piece it is...beautiful. Bravo !

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Suhd.
Glad you liked it.
Beautiful poem. I love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear! :)
Waw beautiful poem! I love it :)!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you did!
Beautiful sentiments Miss Jyoti, You have greatly improved in your writes through the past years. Your words selections are always a treat to read,,, very cool piece of poetry, specially the Second Stanz,,, very cool, EG.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Long time, Mr. Ten! How are you?
Thank you very much for your kind words.
E G TEN

3 Years Ago

I'm very well young lady, a pleasure to read you always. ;)
Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Good to know! :)
I love this it has good emotional depth Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
There are some issues of flow that can be fixed with the addition of a few defining words. If I may be so bold I would like to offer this critique edit

In her deep brown eyes, he swam
Searching for a flicker of light
And found a tethered piece of hope
With her soul wrapped around it

He excavated a drowned heart
And found a mine full of broken stars
Patiently he fixed all the pieces
Lightening of life out shined darkness

And happiness kissed her at last

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bear! Happy to hear from you! Glad you visited!
I will try to alter things .. read more
Lovely poem! :) "And happiness kissed her at last" Wow.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Gullia! Glad you liked it! :)

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