Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by K. Harding

Her eyes were screaming colour in a monochrome world;
A spectrum of radiance and grandeur.
Her scars were a canvas of porcelain perfection;
The resting memories of a voyager.

© 2016 K. Harding


Author's Note

K. Harding
Kind of got a few lines in and didn't know how to finish it without ruining it. Not really a poem, but not really much of any of the other options either.

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you could leave it as it is, but your theme of eyes is very broad. windows to the soul, they show pain, their pretty etc...

Posted 8 Years Ago


K. Harding

8 Years Ago

The idea to have a title as broad as "Eyes" was intention. Eyes are extremely symbolic and ambiguous.. read more
Forgive the boldness, but sounds like an opening prelude for a story. And it is amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


K. Harding

8 Years Ago

I never even looked at it that way but you are right. Thank you!
Shannon

8 Years Ago

Then we would get to meet her!
Thank you for starting... And stopping.
A healing touch for a wounded soul.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bacchus

8 Years Ago

...I thought of this poem today while listening to the Beatles- "a girl with kaleidoscope eyes"
K. Harding

8 Years Ago

I haven't heard that song, I'm not impartial to a bit of The Beatles though so I will definitely giv.. read more
Bacchus

8 Years Ago

Just a random line- that drew me back to this-
You keep it ambiguous... that way I can still .. read more
i like the imagery, not sure where its going but i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


K. Harding

8 Years Ago

Not even this poet knows where this was going but thank you!
Why not let it rest, come back to it and finish with fresh thoughts?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K. Harding

8 Years Ago

I have been lingering on this a very long time and I still do not know how to finish this haha

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Added on March 18, 2016
Last Updated on March 18, 2016
Tags: Romance, Love, Eyes

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K. Harding
K. Harding

United Kingdom



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Philosopher of the stars. A voice in the choir of scars. Inspired by Tuomas Holopainen & Edgar Allan Poe. more..

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