Hail to Music Baby

Hail to Music Baby

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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On Grey's Anatomy, Kristina was gettin her dance on extremely well & told typically whiny Meredith she did not want to listen to her whine - Meredith needed to - "Dance It Off"... love the concept!

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There's music playing in my soul

There's a backbeat in my head

Moves and twists and makes me whole

Without it, I'd be dead.

 

Rhythms pulse like my heartbeat

Sends me to a place so right

Can't sit still - got to move my feet

Bass rocks the mood so tight

 

Eyes close to grab the drumline

Hips moving on their own

Singer's smokey words so fine

They're making love's loss known

 

Dance it off and dance it good

There's smiles with every move

Feeling like you know you should

You're rockin' in the groove


 

 

 

kath nehls

 

 

 

© 2014 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


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Kath, this poem dances it off. :-D

"Without it, I'd be dead" I couldn't agree more with this line. For a long time I always felt if I had to lose my sight or my hearing, I would chose hearing. I'm not so sure anymore. The eyes deceive in ways the ears seldom do. I like to think the ears are more honest. ;-)



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice! "Bass rocks the mood so tight... Singer's smokey words so fine..." Oh, this is definitely y-o-u. There is a real freedom in the movement of this piece... it is very fluid. I love it!... looking at past reviews / timestamps... for some reason, I don't remember this one. Thanks for reposting it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now that's a way to beat the blues add a little rhythm (I love that six letter word) and shake baby shake

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kath, this poem dances it off. :-D

"Without it, I'd be dead" I couldn't agree more with this line. For a long time I always felt if I had to lose my sight or my hearing, I would chose hearing. I'm not so sure anymore. The eyes deceive in ways the ears seldom do. I like to think the ears are more honest. ;-)



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome write! The magic of music on us feels great, makes us feel on a new level and can make us spring into spontaneous dance. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dancing...is there anything else in life?
wonderful write here!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes yes dance on, music to celebrate life and music to heal us. Certain times of of our lives it seems like the words to every song has been written especially for us. This poem flows really well, very nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! Makes me wanna get up and bust a move! It's something special.. the way music makes us feel, vibrating to our souls. Excellent piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Excellent Kath. Very lyrical beat that flows nicely. Ken

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Music...it surrounds our lives and bathes us in serenity or nostalgia. It brings us passion, assuages the pain. Kath, this is a great write. I can identify with it so easily. Lydia

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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