Dripping Wet - By Einstein Noodle & KWP

Dripping Wet - By Einstein Noodle & KWP

A Poem by KWP
"

so E and I got together to write this one - what a treat

"

driver of lust 

I fight, 

I fuse 

ragged i quiver as I  

accelerate

desire 

for you


reckless abandon

i have not had enough

deep inhale  

I lose myself in the

trailing essence 

of you


me, my mind, 

you


hunger insatiable

devours appetite for now

you satiate 


Stop! 

I have enough 


this obliteration within a

terrified heart, 

lay at the bottom of you 

my river


as mystics observe 

waters of change

we are the all 


limp in need 

whisked to waterfalls edge 

reeling in bursting foam

you almost controlled me 


this bleeding heart aware 

consummation in you

must never be absolute 


I want you


I can’t


i need you 


I shan’t 



exhale empties 

rivers change 

cleanse 

I see you from afar 

pain subsiding 


with you 

without you 


the sun will always shine

© 2018 KWP


Author's Note

KWP
we started with a quote and went forwards from that point ...
"'In emptiness, there is no object to be grasped by the senses" Osho

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Well, if this isn't just lovely! So sensually playful, just the right intensity. Dueling wordsmiths. This one shines.

Posted 2 Years Ago


nice words dear
i could see the overflow of emotions of u two


Posted 2 Years Ago


really glad you have posted our work together ...i feel grateful and gratified with the outcome .. you are a gem KW ...
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


nice work, love the quote too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Must be my lucky week . . . two collabs by you two in two days! This one is definitely sharp as a tack, when it comes to nailing that wavering uncertainty between trying to choose "safe" & plunging in with every fiber. This writing feels like two snakes slithering together, it's so connected, so fluid, so complimentary in the back-and-forths. You two definitely have the magic together! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wonderful job by two talented writers. Outstanding poetry shared dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


A seamless collaboration you two..love the flowing verses easily gliding from one emotion to another letting the reader feel the pure passion yet with guilty desire..kudos to both on a well done piece..


Posted 2 Years Ago


i thought it was great,blended well

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It reads disjointed but it could be worse given that two different people wrote it.

The topic is pretty cliché and generic. It almost wants to be a love poem but it doesn't have any kind of focus. No offense, this is not good writing. Most collaborations aren't good writing. I don't really understand why people try... collabs are nine times out of ten just a gimmick.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KWP

2 Years Ago

You are funny .. I expected nothing less from you ... I do understand your point about collaboration.. read more
DDav

2 Years Ago

I really only meant the first sentence. The rest could go either way so I picked a more negative ro.. read more
DDav

2 Years Ago

Oh and by the way... the retard in the red shirt (wordman, the other thing that reviewed this)… he.. read more

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