Sparingly Is Not Life

unrequited flood of love 

sparingly you dose yours like 

an under-flavoured cordial

the sweetness of life 

derives not from your lavish gifts with a price tag 

try, if you will, the understanding of

unique viewpoint of man

lament a while, for

she observes life her own

extravagant realm 

- ah, how delightful! she owns it

what a gift to see the diversity of thought 

sibling to sibling 

man to woman

country and culture 

we are all ballerina’s 

spinning wildly on our own trajectories

it’s all marvellous, my friend

marvellous to join this 

synchrodestiny with you

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

why fight the chaos ;))))))))) it has its own place ... she asks a lot my friend ... passion these days conflates with stubborn opinion :( and feelings exchanged for facts .. hard to see the greater picture of things ..you have inspired and brought a comfortable river i immerse me self in right now ... ahhhhhhhhh
best of all to you dahlink
E.

[andrew mitchell]

nice work liz yes one has to live life to the fullest, sparingly means one could miss much that awaits one. I enjoyed the third and fifth stanzas, classic lines

[KWP]

hey you - cheers my friend - he the heat relented down there?

[andrew mitchell]

awful last week 47.7 C Thursday where i worked was too much as well as the heatwave for the whole week. We don't have air con either!

[KWP]

oh my - no air con! I wish you winds from the Antarctic XX