Achieve Bliss

Achieve Bliss

A Poem by KWP

like the season end to the Poppy’s in Kashmir

soon, this too, will be gone


allow yourself a good life

where dreams are filled with

the building blocks of your keepers love


don’t look back

what you leave behind has already been

ground to dust and 

thrown to the wind


today's seeds shall be planted


the Poppy’s of Kashmir shall grow 

in a new found land and

delivered to those 

desperate to escape 

the all, the left behind

© 2022 KWP


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Amazing poetry my dear friend.
"don’t look back
what you leave behind has already been
ground to dust and
thrown to the wind"
The above line I liked. Born from dust and we will become dust again. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


your poem gives me pause to ponder ... such a dose of romance in Kashmir's poppy fields, bliss perhaps and remembrances of the War dead ... "..the building blocks of your keepers love" ... puzzling my dear ;) so much to be had reading V2 L1 says i .. love that and the theme of leaving the past behind .. seeing it "ground to dust.." very freeing .. closing two lines especially tweek me ol' noodle ... desperate to escape the all ... why would one be???? i suppose fear ... no terror would perhaps throw one into a headlong fleeing from the "all" ... much to think about ... luv and joy Elizabeth ... Ms. world traveler ;)))
E.

Posted 7 Months Ago


the all, the left behind.----------such a wonderful wording.
we plant new seeds every day...and much of what we have built before was just a practice round...now the real one starts, and should we be ready for annihilation---
That seed has been planted now, or so it seems.
Really good write KWP....there is distance between your posts, but they are sure worth waiting for.
jacob

Posted 8 Months Ago


KWP

8 Months Ago

Hey Thanks Jacob ... always great to hear from you. You entice me to sit and write - such a wonderfu.. read more
Deeply missed. Always artistic and true.♥️😍

Posted 8 Months Ago



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