forward motion

forward motion

A Poem by KWP

to know when is enough, to walk 
away unguarded, to know you must 
face the pain of empty tomorrows


don't you dare look back 

up ahead
it's you! 
chasing rainbows filled with 
new promise 

don't you dare look back

© 2022 KWP


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Chasing rainbows with what, dear friend! Your mind and intention is a hard taskmaster, isn't it?!
I know your mind and intention travel far and wide - must take a leaf out of your book... soon.

Hope life is being kind. Stay a while some time so we can natter a few.

Posted 1 Year Ago


KWP

1 Year Ago

always new promise in every moment yes ??

good to see you my friend ...

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emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Sent a week ago and yet I've only just found it... your guess is as good as mine!

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This is an inspiring little poem. Thank you for this, invigorating on this dark day of mine. So pleasant with your rainbows and other pleasantries

Posted 2 Years Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Smiling the world would be a wish come true for me, Brad. Many thanks for your review. Keep safe, ta.. read more
Brad Dehler

1 Year Ago

Absolutely!
That sounds like good sound advice! These are words we know we just don't always do as we should. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Often ignore my own advice, Diane - that's how it goes, yes ? Many thanks, will be calling. Please.. read more
Walking away is often extremely difficult but not as difficult I believe as having the willpower to never look back. Not even a fleeting glance? Nope...eyes forward, the future awaits.
I know this is an older piece for you but I have been away for a while so it is all new to me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

This is a disgracefully late thank you, willweb, my
sincere apologies. Looking back is hell, .. read more
Sometimes we must my dear friend.
"don't you dare look back"
The above lines, we must do. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


To walk away is a hard step but to know that the future is promised is promising. This is a good one

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cassie

2 Years Ago

Hi, This has made me smile. I have been well, life..(sigh) You, how are you?
KWP

2 Years Ago

It's really nice to see you - you have always had a nice warm energy :)

I am fine - .. read more
Cassie

2 Years Ago

You too, you are such a good vibe and I enjoy reading you. Hope your day is going on great. Let me r.. read more
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Gee
Tis the hardest thing to do, not looking back. At the time it breaks the heart but the heart then alway mends, each time a wee bit stronger.
Hope you are keeping well m'dear and enjoying life :)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


Good morning,
My philosophy exactly..
Never ever dare to look back... go forward to new hopes and promises.
Tomorrows will be filled with love if one lets it.
Lisa, 7:30 am in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wouldn't dare, ever! That much and more is taken on board. Thanks for sharing. /Frederick.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Don't you dare look back at yesterday's sadness and gloom, don't look back at all the hardships you've been through. Look ahead at tomorrow because one day you'll be ridden of your sorrows, chasing the rainbows, forgetting that feeling of hollow. This is a poem filled with optimism, one must remain positive in the struggles they face to welcome better days. A powerful write!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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