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A Book by Kackerlacka
 Fantasy: Intended to take place in a time period perhaps similar to early renaissance.
The story begins with a boy, or perhaps a creature, living in a small village on a distant island.  © 2014 Kackerlacka
Author's Note
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I'm curious on the following:
Sentences : Does it flow? Is there any confusion on PoV?
Detail: Too much, too little?
Anything that sticks out as poor~ Which could be all of it, I appreciate any criticism, so long as it will help me progress
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Added on December 21, 2014
Last Updated on December 21, 2014
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KackerlackaMN
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Novice writer. Just trying something out because I enjoy it. Looking for criticism and pointers.
While I tend to live and study in the US, I'm currently studying abroad in Sweden. I love language.. more..
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