Desparpajo

Me dejé un par de pestañas en tu hombro. 

                                          Ahora soy un poquito tuya.

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 I left a couple eyelashes on your shoulder. 

                                          Guess I’m a little bit yours now.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Oh, "Yes, Kaede, sooo smooth and easy⁓"
Love your choice of artwork, and the tenderly embracing imagery in your words virtually radiate out from their inviting warmness … and, ohhh I love how creative and appealing your eyelashes left on his shoulder softly, sweetly mark your territory.

Romantically cute, you sensually touch the imagination in so few words … ummm, love it mucho! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Kaede16]

Glad you enjoyed it Richard :)

[Richard🖌]

Yeahhh!
Me, too, Kaede ; )

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

Que dulce / how sweet your words.

[DAH]

Holy Moly!

This minimalist masterpiece snaps like a wet towel.
Unique-absolute on so many levels.

It has a cinematic liveliness to it.

Bravo, Poet!
DAH

[Kaede16]

hahaha glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for passing by :)

[DAH]

My pleasure!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So softly romantic, so simple and symbolic, so short and yet so powerful and poignant in its message to someone who has obviously become deeply meaningful to the protagonist.

[Kaede16]

"Softly romantic" is what I was going for. Thank you for your review :)