End My Life

End My Life

A Poem by Kai Muhsik
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This is about someone who wants to commit suicide, but can't really bring herself to do it. She keeps looking for reasons to stay, but the only one she can find is that she doesn't want to leave this person she has a crush on. She just doesn't want to lea

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Sometimes I want to end my life.
Sometimes it's too hard, too hard to find -
the reasons to stay here
I'm losing my mind

But I won't
cause there's still some hope
If you could see me
I would tell you
that I'm not okay
but I won't
leave tonight
cause I'm not ready to see you go

Sometimes I want to end my life
When I'm falling asleep,
sometimes I think about these things
The reasons to stay here are
sometimes too hard to find
so I'll just sit here
slowly losing my mind

© 2009 Kai Muhsik


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The third stanza is my favorite.
"so I'll just sit here
slowly losing my mind"
I often feel the same way.
The last two lines have a great flow, also.


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Kai Muhsik
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