Ash

It's supposed to be a first person narrative that leads up to the events of Dust. It's one of the characters from Dust, Yael, telling her story. I want to flesh it out as much as it needs. Let me know what you think needs changed, dropped, or expanded on. Be critical.

It's the first draft. I wrote it off of the character bio/plot outline I made for her so it's definitely a rough version. It doesn't have to be novel length but I think expanding on it more would be nice. It's currently sitting at 3,812 words so it definitely has room for expansion.