I just can't love you back.

I just can't love you back.

A Poem by ~FALL3N-ANG3L~
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Lyrics by a song, but my own personal twist of things.

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I can love you each day,
I can love you everyday. 
I can love everything you do,
I can love the things you say. 
I can love you with everything,
I can love you with all my heart.
I can love you every second,
I can love you every minute.
I can love the way you smile,
I can love everything you wear.
I can love you til pigs fly,
I can love you til angels fall.
I can love you til the sun comes up,
I can love you til the moon goes down. 
I can love the way you laugh,
I can love the way your voice squeaks.
I can love anything about you,
I can love everything an then some.
But I just can't love you back, 
I just can't love you back. 
I know its hard to,
I know its not you. 
I know its different with you, 
I know our bond we have. 
But, baby.
I just can't love you back. 
Maybe its our history,
Maybe its our fights. 
Maybe its how your so cute when,
Maybe its how you get so mad. 
I could love you with all my heart,
I could love you with all my mind. 
But the hardest part is,
I just can't love you right back. 
I love you like crazy, 
I love you like a madman.
I love you like its nothing,
I love you like its natural. 
But that's the hardest part,
I just can't love you right back.. 

© 2012 ~FALL3N-ANG3L~


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Confusing ... that's why it fits so well with a confuising feeling like "love" and to a way of writing like the "flow of thoughts". The poem has pathos, largely made by the anaphoras, the metrica is amazing, that was a pleasant reading :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~FALL3N-ANG3L~

11 Years Ago

Well, thank you very much for the review an thoughts. I'm glad you liked it.
外人 (Gaijin)

11 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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I'm 16 yrs old, I'm French-Canadian. I live in Fl, but am from Tn. I'm a rock girl, with some country twists. I'll always be a redneck at heart but, too consumed by rock music haha. Poetry is my escap.. more..

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