Live Free

Be a leader, not a follower. Don't die without doing something you've always wanted to do.

Puree your heart.

let the pieces be free.

With all of my love,

don't forget to breathe.

Although you may fail,

somethings are meant

to be.

To forsake your temper,

your train to derail.

In any sort of praise

I give to you.

I let our love be free,

'Cause I was the one

you chose to save.

I refrained from clenching

my fists and knocking the

beauty away.

I refrained from dreaming

in such a dark, metallic

wave.

Drowning each individual.

Growing in the living water.

I must refrain from calling

you and letting it falter.

I crave, and listen to such 

a sweet kiss.

As if two palms were two

destined lips;

howling to be a savor 

for something.

To be much more then 

what others call

nothing.

I cringe and spit.

In nothing more then

an unholy pit.

Your chains drag, and

reveal such an awful scent.

But I love, and love again.

more then a thousand men

can repent.

I bid more then 

a gambler can lose 

his house.

I see when you die,

with the blood on

my blouse.

I carried you away,

making every bone break.

Ruthless am I.

But for what ?

I'll never die.

 

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

People sometimes like to be the followers because it's easier to shut down your mind and do as others say. But they actually waste their whole lives by doing that.
Imagery is very strong in this poem, and is very well described.
I like it a lot! Awesome job.

[Arte]

She never die because she believes in angels and the light always there. Your poem is so wonderful as always. Thanks for sharing.