A Bit of Rising

A Bit of Rising

A Poem by Different Wings

stroking, drawing up
looking up ahead
striking feeling
feeling dazzled
lighting strikes
from far as any,
strong caressing
here and there
soaring, coasting
upwards, onwards
coast upon
the light
that strengthens
over time
and builds to
looking, pureness
seems as lost
as any, striking up
a conversation,
coasting, soaring
pure white brittle
soon to be
but long enough,
just strong enough
and finally
a completeness
and surreality
then vision lost,
vitality, it seems
present for ages
ageless dawning
casting dazzles
onwards, upwards
towards the new
and sleekness

© 2013 Different Wings

Author's Note

Different Wings
The photo is mine; you can see more at kapiyva.deviantart.com

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Added on March 13, 2011
Last Updated on April 9, 2013
Tags: rising, joy, sleekness


Different Wings
Different Wings


Hello! I live in small town New England, USofA. I enjoy writing in many forms, and invite you to read and critique as I do. I have taken all of the writing-attached photos, unless otherwise stated, .. more..