My Arms

My Arms

A Poem by Ariel B.
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Something I wrote a few years ago, sent out to a handful of magazines, and forgot about. Recently it was published in The Stray Branch, which reminded me I'd written the thing in the first place.

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My arms are a map

of history -

an atlas of me -

and my journeys through the sunless lands

of bereavement

and bewilderment:

historical stars

a constellation of scars.

 

The girl I am being introduced to points

and touches my arm and asks me

“What did you use?”

I tell her

and

she smiles and says something about fun.

 

And once again

a little piece of me shrinks

and withers, and longs

to retreat to the stifling

shelter of long,

long

thick black sleeves.

© 2011 Ariel B.


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they are most noticable under neon~ striations of pain . . . . yes . . . . a topography of each of us to whom crying was either impossible or not enough to disgorge the thorns~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the first lines, "My arms are a map of history..." Great comparison.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An interesting write indeed and draws the emotion through the read

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so many emotions run through this piece , personal thoughts of how others percieve , how others can imagine , even glamourize , but never really know

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ariel B.
Ariel B.

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