Salvation

Salvation

A Poem by Kaliou

You cannot refuse the sunset.

Inevitability is the false illusion of control.

 

In chaos and calamity I find logic,

In agony and loneliness I find comfort.

Why am I here?

 

Reclaiming sanity only through rejection,

I am a prisoner of your adoration,

I defy your pagan gods,

I defy your -

I defy.

 

“I am a grain of sand in the eye of the sun”

 

Abandoned by loneliness,

Empathy was never a choice.

Embodied by solitude,

I personified love.

 

In the heart of the heart of another body

In the heart of -

In the heart.

 

 

 

 

         

© 2011 Kaliou


Author's Note

Kaliou
Quote taken from Philippe Ducros

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Wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think you have done an amazing job. Words, form, everything fits perfectly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Interesting commentary on life and hardening yourself against what it throws at you. Although I find, though emotion can hurt, it makes you stronger in the end. Or maybe I'm just a romantic :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


what will be will be...........It is what it is...........wonderful piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice. It reminds me of how punishing life actually is, punishing enough to be called Hell.

Posted 10 Years Ago


so much thought put into this... i had to read it over a few times, there is so much to grasp in this piece! nicely done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


writing a poem with a quote was really great, it reminded me as if you turned a picture into a story, like a lot of writers do. and that was great. I loved it and the writing, very "pure" to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your piece is thought provoking. I like the use of the quote however you are creative and could have developed that line on your own with the same premise....

I especially like the incomplete lines, by leaving them incomplete you are in fact completing the thought.

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOVE IT :) i loved the ending :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Tags: inevitability, fate, love, adoration, defy, defiance, sanity, rejection, heart, loneliness, abandonment, empathy, solitude

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Kaliou
Kaliou

Beirut, Lebanon



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