Flying thoughts

When there are a jumble of thoughts in mind

Everything moved upon

Moved upon like this

 

Eyes open

demystified

hazy

 

Thoughts

flying

hieing

 

Mind

Crumbled

Caged

 

 

Ways

Unknown

Creepy

 

Confusions

waiting

succumbing

 

Me

thinking

and sighing

Image courtesy: http://darkangelp26.deviantart.com/art/Thinking-42887110

 

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

got confused to think what 'll happen now with that hangin' girl....lol, is she gonna jump n fly or is she gonna jump n die,....lol
before she fly i wanna say that's an amazin' write.
i liked your this one.it's a piece i saw here, nice ink, words're good, n the pic.'s too awesome as well...
hey, one more thing before she fly, i wanna say, don't try to fly very high,...lol especially without wings.....lol
well written.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Haha...Thanks ya fr ur wrds Orton.. Well I guess she is ready for the flightless flights :), most prolly with the wings ;)

Gracias :))

[JC]

I really like the title, flying thoughts, how our minds sometimes explode with visions, metaphors, words, thoughts... this is a prime example of our minds not being static, having a heavenly quality...beautiful.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thank you so much Jason for going through and putting your thoughts. Gratitude :-)!

[Onku Ghosh]

When there are a JUmble of thoughts the whole thing becomess confusing......the thoughts are all scattered......there is no link An apt title to a poem on confusing thoughts. Well done!!!

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:-)
Thank you so much for your words, this means a lot :-)

[zainul]

You have captured the confusion very nicely.
Enjoyed the write,Kanchan.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thanks you much for your words :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,mountain poet.:)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

You made me smile again...Thanks :)

[zainul]

I like to join smiling with you.
I went to Nepal,but could not go to The Himalayas.
Just saw a glimpse from a hotel as a shadow.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Ahh..you should come again to visit the Himalayas :)

[zainul]

I must come again.
I hope you will give me strength and support when I will come to visit the Himalayas.
How are you doing the environmental programs now?

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Sure will definitely :-)
Its going good, we are coming up with all our efforts to make things better...Lets see :)

[Akshita]

Nice 1......Keep going.......

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thanks ya :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The mind can make us feel wild and crazy. I like your description and thoughts in the poem. Sometime we must stop and gather our thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Thank you so much Coyote for your words.
It gives me the inspiration to write more :)