-Hello Ms. Alice, In Wonderland.~

Hello Ms. Alice,

Are you in wonderland,

Did you follow that white rabbit yet again,

Did you fall in the hole?

 

Walk around in the land of dreams,

go and have tea with the hatter and hare?

Run into a cashmere cat?

 

Did you meet the queen?

Paint her roses red.

 

Disappoint her til she tried to cut off your head.

 

Then did you finally wake up and realize it was a dream?

A dream so real,

so amazing.

You wished it was real.

Dear Alice,

Dear Alice,

you are late for an important date.

Follow me.

Take my hand,

cause this really wasn't just a dream.

Author's Note

Ignore my stupid grammar problems. :3
Oh and what did ya think? I just had to add an Alice themed piece of work hehe

Reviews

[K.G]

wow. THIS IS AMAZEING! :3 kinda wish my alice in wounderland poem turned out like that T.T and i really like how you formed the stanza'a. and ur grammar is fine love :3

[~Princess~]

Awwws this is epic I love it. Ok I am ready to take your hand haha. we can search far and wide in the land of dreams. something so real you're like infinity. we could walk great heights and even sore or wake up a dinosaur. We can tumble around in flower beds and have dreams stuck in our head. We can run through fields of gold or even run for the snow. Eat candy as tall as sky scrapers and dance like no one is watching. Love you Zero yet another wonderful piece of art you have love you sis.

Ichiru