My wet dreams instead of you

My wet dreams instead of you

A Poem by Loner
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This poem is about a lover who craves for her lover at night when she is away from him..

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             My wet dream instead of you


I toss and turn every night thinking of you, hot and restless
in my bed with just a limp pillow to hug instead of you
with my eyes shut and not fully asleep i reach out for you

but its just myself in the room  to cradle with moans of

despair in the pitch darkness when it should be you
instead to hold me in your arms, close to your bare
chest, running your fingers in my tangled loose hair
our faces just an inch apart and are lips thirsty


 caress as they find each other with our naked bodies

under the sheet and the wind blowing from the bedroom
window, a moon shines on our entwined hot, exasperated

bodies craving for more and more not know how to stop

our love making passes through the phase of its high's and

low's when we reach down to feel each others heat
that turns us on even more we refrain from putting
an end to this playful act of ours and reach for kisses


in order to turn the fire back on, we kiss till our lips
our swollen we fondle each other till we are wet as a
blanket but we do not give up this feeling of desire
within our selves , then the time comes when i scream

for you to burst into me like  gushing water out of a
dam which needs just a signal or a nod to let go of
its fullness, i guide your hardness in this pitch darkness

to my alley and you just push yourself in me in one

swift swing while i tighten my grip on you with

my legs around your hips i pull you towards me
not letting go of you this time, i feel you fill me

through and through that is when you come on

top of me and kiss my half open lips, sucking at them

licking and biting at times i welcome this intimacy between us
because this is what i also want , the more you push in me
the harder we kiss, while this is going on you grab my

wet sweaty breasts to hold on to and you kneed them away
sometimes hard sometimes slow , this makes me even more
wet and i get hold of your balls and squeeze them which makes
you moan and push harder in me we abuse each other , we bite

now and then but still are not over with each other finally

when i reach my orgasm as it takes me a while to do so
which is why i never let you enter me so soon , i hug you
tighter then before and we reach our limits together

when i open my eyes finally its just me in my bed with
yet another wet dream of mine to accompany me
instead of you , i get up wash and bathe with a long sigh
hoping this will be the last wet dream of mine instead of you....
 

© 2012 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
Hope its liked by all again .... honest reviews and ratings please

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I didn't like the font colour.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Awesome work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loner

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your review Matt
Romantic and hot! Dreams like that are worth remembering!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

6 Years Ago

Thanks a million for your review
Whew! this was hot, sensous, very sexy indeed! love the opening stanza and the ending just intwined it all together perfectly!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your time and your sweet review .....
i am honored ....
imagination101

7 Years Ago

Welcome! Thanks for all my reviews as well! I'm a little behind on my reading"LOL"
Loner

7 Years Ago

U are always welcome ....
Very hot piece of poetry, yet the last paragraph adds that emotional human side to the contrasting animalistic raw side....great writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thanks a million Yas for your kind and lovely review although this
poem of mine is a nude piec.. read more
Jibey

7 Years Ago

I liked that you gave vent to your aroused desires
Loner

7 Years Ago

* smiles *
Lots of passion and emotion here!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Teri B for your time and nice review i really
appreciate it from the bottom of my.. read more
This was sensational! It flowed out of you, like love juices... You imagined the scene with such intense feelings, as though it was real... You described in graohic and explicit terms the foreplay with is caresses and fondlings.. and then the plunging of his member into your dark depths and your urgent response.. love the kneeding of sweaty breasts and the squeezing of balls... I woke up to the fact that it was a dream in the last verse... but it had seemed so real up to then...

Lovely, wild writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Jibey...
Jibey

7 Years Ago

So formal :-)
Vey hot, with a melancholy ending..well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thanks Dream weaver it means a lot to me your review.
Dream Weaver

7 Years Ago

You're quite welcome Loner...

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