Life in a box

Life in a box

A Poem by Loner
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Just a prospective what life is all about , and why we should live it ...........

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         Life in a box

Enough of the bragging about love
and the dam romance let me not
fool myself further, and talk about
life which is invisible but vital

Harsh, but for some nothing but
a piece of trash, everyone has
something or another to say about
their life in a box which is over

Before you know it, " Hey ! ... i was
too young to die, let me die i have
nothing to live for, i am breathing
just for you baby".... are just excuses

Too either die or live for someone
or another, at times maybe nothing
to live for, are the different shades of
what you , me and everyone is living

This thing inflicted upon us  is either
a blessing or a punishment
to deal with are different point of views heard now and then about this life ......

In a box, i am not a preacher neither
am i fond of living, but then why be a
coward/cowardice and run away from
something which is giving me and you

A tough time why not stare in its eyes
and face the game fight, dam it fight
till you have no strength anymore that
is what i call a brave heart , until then its an

Escapist attitude loosing without even
attempting at it, before you know it
this life grins at you saying " i win you
loose , you are such a looser " by then

Its too late to get up and charge at the
dam life because either you are dead
by then or have lost all what you owned
"life is a teacher learn from it, try not to

Trip over the same stone twice"  is  what
is said by the Messenger of God so why
not keep this in our minds and deal with
the good or bad we have on our hands

And learn from our mistakes by not
repeating them again rather then cursing
our life why not turn over a new leaf
before its too late .... after all its just

A life in a box .......    

                        

© 2012 Loner


Author's Note

Loner
A different poem from all the love and romantic ones ....
Hope i have succeeded in being serious once in my life.....

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You have inspired a few things to think about...

Diego

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loner

6 Years Ago

So very thankful to u for taking the time out and giving me
such a precious review i am really.. read more
Lessons to learn and live by!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loner

6 Years Ago

I really appreciate your review thanks a lot.
Great message in this well written piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loner

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your time and review.
I like the gutsy strength of this, the determination and affirmation of facing life's challenges and not running away from them... The writing shows the strength of your mind and provides a nicely gift-wrapped box of wisdom

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

I bow to u in humbleness Jibey ........ thanks a lot
Wow, with the emotion and power in this, just . . . wow. Awesome writing. The message you send is a unique and powerful one, great job. I am entranced within the lines, well written, amazing. . .

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

I will always treasure your reviews which are so
encouraging for me ....... thanks a million o.. read more
A beautiful piece my dear. Rich with genuine emotion and each line inspires more than the last.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much BC for your review and appreciation
it means a lot too me....
Very wise and well said! i couldn't agree more.. much respect.
*two thumbs up* :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

So very sweet of you too take out time
and give me such an encouraging review thanks a lot..... read more
Wow!!! This sure is serious, deep and philsophical....
has wisdom that rings true and inspires the reader when read.....
at least it did me.

And you're an inspiration too :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loner

7 Years Ago

Yas u are a true gentleman and shower kindness upon me
as rain pours on a dead sun flower ...... read more
SoulCrusader (Yas)

7 Years Ago

you're most welcome :D

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