Color me the way you want too

Color me the way you want too

A Poem by Loner

This is the way of surrendering oneself to ones lover to all his needs and desires in order to keep him happy.

                       Color me the way you want too

I know we have our differences but not to this extent that you
refuse to talk to me, look at me at least i am the one you love
you desire, scream , shout say something please as i cannot
bear your silence anymore it tears my heart into pieces my love!

Today take me for your canvas as i know you are an artist
and painting is your passion, take this brush in your hand
and this pallet in the other, paint me with any color that comes
in your mind, and color me the way you want too, my beloved ...

You know i can go to any extent for you then why not

communicate with me? ... how big is my mistake that
it is hard to forgive, do not test me further as i have no
strength left in me, you are all i have do what you want to

With me, i will not move an inch paint me with the way
you want too i want to see your mind set after all what
is in your mind after all? People say colors say a lot about
a person's mind and personality then paint me Red, Blue,

Green, Pink, Purple, any color that comes in hand i want
to see your absurdness and you see my patience cum
love for you then we will see who wins in the end after this
game of bizarreness is over, now that i am full of colors

From head to toe, your strokes are still going on back and
forth i stand still forgetting even to breath, my eyes hurt because
i have paint all over my face i start to cry now, new streak
s of tears
make straight  lines down my cheeks, i try hard not to make a sound

But end up making a face, i burst out crying, that is the time i think
this is it .... he will kill me now and never come back again

but to my surprise i feel his arms around me and him saying
" I am so sorry you asked for it" ....

This makes us burst out laughing and to my surprise again

i look beautiful to him in that horrible state when i would not
 look at myself at all, i guess love is all about patience , testing
understand , trust and game of wait and watch ....



© 2013 Loner

Author's Note

An experiment of mine how lovers behave with each other...
Hope you all like this one too...

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I think this was alright but I wonder what other people think of it.

Posted 5 Years Ago

What a cute poem, I really love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thanks for appreciating my poem Rotena ...
A lovely insight into lovers' games.. and how we like to submit to the desires of one another, to give pleasure and brighten our lives..

A fine poem, well conceived...

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much Jibey .... i am really honored by your review.
wow, your use of metaphors and intricate details is so perfect...

brings the whole relationship and the sacredness between the two to life..

awesome :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on June 8, 2013
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