Lack Of Trust

Lack Of Trust

A Poem by KaoticOrder
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What goes through my head when I hear words like "I love you"

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I heard words I never believed before
But instead of listening, I closed the door
My mind damaged my life beyond repair...

I hid in the shadows and lost myself
Acting out, but can't ask for help
Open my mouth, but out only comes air...

I push away because I'd rather not pretend
Get my hopes up just to get hurt again
Because in the end, no body's there...

You never saw the world through my eyes
If you did, you'd probably wish to die
Delusions make reality disappear.

© 2015 KaoticOrder


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Rather wonderful I must say, the flow throughout is beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


KaoticOrder

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
So true. Lack of trust is an issue, one that comes from giving your heart away, then wishing you hadn't. Thanks for sharing this powerful work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


KaoticOrder

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Phenomenal work. I love the last line, Delusions make reality dissappear. Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


KaoticOrder

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!!

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KaoticOrder
KaoticOrder

Essex, MD



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My name is Nerissa, but I go by Kaos on most writing sites. I am a twenty two year old aspiring writer and a stay at home Mother of a darling little angel named Sabrina. Began writing as dabbles an.. more..

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