Receipt

Receipt

A Poem by Kara

Wondering mind
Depression
I want to scream
I want a thrill
To fear for my life
To rid of these dreams
Take my last breath
Rethink.
There's a better way.
Recall.
How did I get here?
Regret.
Forget the past.
Rebirth.
Become someone new.
Rebuild.
Take control of this lunacy.
Rebuke.
Who the hell am I kidding?

© 2012 Kara


Author's Note

Kara
A poem I wrote on receipt paper at work awhile ago.
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I like how you use words. With few words making your points clear and understandable. I like the complete poem. The ending was perfect. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think this one is good but could easily be great if you traitors and made it a little longer. It'd especially be good if you used a metaphor about receipts too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you end it, and I think the structure is clever. You can tell it fits on the back of a little receipt :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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