A Poem by Luna Northstar

I've written a lot of things in the past few days; most, not so nice, and I'm too afraid to publish them. But this is how I feel. Play song at the bottom.

I look through photographs
Of us when we were young

I wonder if you even care
Of the evil we have done....

I try to reach out to you
But its like your not there

And I cry in loneliness and sorrow
Nothings ever fair...

I cry for your help
I cry for your love

I wonder if you even hear
The pleas of my heart

I look through photographs
Of us when we were young

I wish we could go back
To the days of happiness

I wish I could forget
The evil I have done

But memories slip from view
As did all the fun

I wish we could go back
To the days from photographs...

© 2010 Luna Northstar

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Luna Northstar

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What a great piece. It flows so well on a bittersweet subject. I cried a little bit. Excellent job.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is really sad...I felt like I was going to cry while reading was because sometimes I feel like I could go back to happiness...then I realize I can't because a new problem starts...and depresses me again...but this was beautiful to me...I hope you can find your happiness... I really do...thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awww Miharu!!! You poor thing!!! I think I may know who this is about, but I'm unsure.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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sad and great. Hope i read more from you! you have a very beautiful mind and soul

Posted 11 Years Ago

A sad, emotional piece of literature that is very well written. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

seems to be a sad poem, but really great one. it is so touching, I loved it. Keep it up and well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

full of emotion. well written. super.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I really love the real emotion I felt through this poem. I would love to read more when I can get to them. Keep up the great work. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 20, 2010
Last Updated on August 20, 2010


Luna Northstar
Luna Northstar

I go by the name Luna Northstar and take my writing very seriously. I've grown out of my teenage angst poetry writing phase and I'm focusing on my novel "It's Alice", though I tend to write a few shor.. more..


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