Hemingway Drips

Hemingway Drips

A Poem by Karen Redburn

Hemingway delusion's eat the day

Lost in writing sniff black lines

Dark letters white space here we pray

Afternoon sun stream rays divine

Grimy house drip drop goes the tap

Walls corner cobwebs crying dust me

Creativity messy 

Kids are home screaming food!

No time for Hemingway's scene

© 2018 Karen Redburn


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Hemingway is one of my favorites. Nicely done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Karen Redburn

1 Year Ago

Thank you and appreciate the comment!
lol very smart i think that would go down well at a stand up comedy night very good work very brave

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love Hemingway, one of my favorite writers. Of course, if Hemingway were there, he'd be deep in a bottle of booze, numb to those drips, cries and screams--he'd just bleed on paper until another masterpiece came to life. Truly enjoyed this one!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Karen Redburn

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, always appreciate your input Robert.
Ah' 'For Whom the Bell Tolls' sounds like you could do with a holiday, or read him in the bath maybe. An intriguing write & an enjoyable read to boot.......N

Posted 1 Year Ago


Karen Redburn

1 Year Ago

Very intuitive, yep a holiday would be heaven. Thanks for stopping by and reviewing!
Neville Pettitt

1 Year Ago

My pleasure entirely....
To be consumed to create and capture images coming as fast as the speed of light, can put a damper on the weekly cleaning schedule.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Karen Redburn

1 Year Ago

Hey there, thanks so much for reviewing. We see eye to eye on this poem. Thanks so much for the comm.. read more
ernest hemingway, what a writer full of puzzles and mystery. there is soul in your writing karen.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Karen Redburn

1 Year Ago

Thank you for commenting.

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Added on February 27, 2018
Last Updated on March 7, 2018
Tags: poem, poetry, free verse

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Karen Redburn
Karen Redburn

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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