A Little Less Than Eloquent

This is extremely well written. Completely and utterly honest. A down-to-the-bone type writing that I enjoyed. Well done, dear.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Good stuff, your style of writing i like, so i'll read pretty much anything. Talking about good lines; 'The same bones that straighten out this flesh I peel back sometimes to expose the nerves and heart and everything else that gets damaged in a car-wreck of a heart-break.' Wow. And also just the seemingly bizarre but useful advice 'to never buy two concert tickets'. Makes sense. All I can suggest about all this is to be confident in who you are, assertive in what you do, and authentic in your faith. I'll refrain from the countless drummer jokes... Ciao.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Hey this was great. Musings are a form of writing anyway, and this was a very thoughtful piece. Maybe it general storyline base of it was missing but that's okay. Mainly because musings have a special place of their own =] And somehow you always seem to recall what your exact thoughts were every time you re-read a journal type entry. Great work =]

Posted 14 Years Ago