rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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This is original, inventive, and fun.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Like the last line very much, nice short piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think the way the first line sounds really helps bring this idea to life. All of those sounds are very liquid, they flow down the page. It makes me see that silver rain as if it were on my own window. The bit about the rain waltzing makes me think of a soft spring shower that steadily blankets everything. This was a very peaceful scene you brought to life, thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


very well described poem good use of alteration and imagery :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


outstanding placing of words.....
nicely written..

Posted 7 Years Ago


its fallin flling falling

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very promising piece...I'd love to see you chase this one down and wrangle a more drawn out storyline. Pitter patter pompous? Perfect. ;)

CM

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love this.it was short and yet the message was passed

Posted 8 Years Ago


very nice. a little happieness on a rainy day :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


alliteration and deep meaning

Posted 8 Years Ago



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