rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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love it great

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice...I enjoyed this short little poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice truly

Posted 8 Years Ago


I see a woman, tears streaming, standing at the mirror on a rainy day that more than perfectly describes her emotions. She is in a wedding dress about to go to the alter with a man she doesn't truly love. The "slowly slipping silver" is her taking off the engagement ring given to her many months ago as it "waltzes down the [pain]" of her soul and she can hear the "pitter patter pompous march" of her bridesmaids down the aisle. She decides she's not ready for this and runs away and joins the "dances of the rain[s]"

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so perfectly danced.. the rhythm and sweet silver rhyme.. Can see every happy drop.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow nice poem i like it:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I truly appreciated the alliteration =]

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really love rain too. you've remembered my rainy days indeed. well written, your words are quite nice, powerful that's if i say.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the simple straight forward way this is written. Katherine I feel that I can see almost feel the drops as they slide down the window pane. I loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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K.
K.

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