rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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Fun.. short and simple, but so descriptive and true :) Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love lovely painting.
Rain enjoys dancing!


Posted 8 Years Ago


It's interesting having our thoughts analyzed... the word choice we use. Ever wonder about the kind of couch a thought must lay on? Do they have to make counselling appointments? Follow-ups? And if they DO change - do they still exist to be remembered?

I liked your take on the rain - reminded me quiet days.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Joe
Yeah I Love The Music Of It, Kat! :)

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"a pitter patter pompous march
the dances of the rain"

Lovely Pen! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


K.

8 Years Ago

kate*
thankyou!
Very unique and intriguing. Love the choice of words you used to create this poem. Great work. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This could be a right up there with "rain, rain, go away," a hundred years from now! I couldn't help but put a musical melody to the words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


lovly


Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the rain. This little verse captures that exquisite strut down the pane quite nicely.

Well said.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Like lovers making love,
painted and framed,
I hear it softly roar,
a drumming, that can not be tamed...

Lovely write, Katherine, I wish it could be longer, but the description and metaphor was wonderful, nevertheless.

~Ev

Posted 8 Years Ago


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quick? this is brilliant!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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