rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

© 2013 K.


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what keegan said..yes...the waltzing down the pane, the pair of raindrops...

the pompous march...could be two people--uppity but sliding down...like a raindrop...we all fall at one time or another...we need to get our heads out of the clouds.

nice alliteration use also.


jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Waltzes down the pane :) Can actually picture two rain drops, touching each other slowly moving to the beat of the rhythm and romance of the afternoon as jazz music plays in the backdrop. :) Short, sweet and beautiful. What an elegant write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Beautiful description,Katherine.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow. just pure beautiful. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short, but I like it. It had a rain-like rhythm to it, and you captured this picture of the weather very well. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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