Unspoken Words

A word once spoken , is heard and understood

But a word unspoken is tough and broken 

Into little pieces filled with feelings of hurt and choken

Comprehending the words unspoken is a anxious mystery 

The words unspoken by the person who wants 

Somebody to unravel it and solve the mystery 

Of the mind till the heart , every corner every part 

And listen to blisters causing these unspoken thoughts

A word unspoken is a child needing attention , 

To cater to its needs and fend off detention 

The detention of loneliness and just be heard 

Hear me and my thoughts and heal the hurt 

We all need someone who can understand our unspoken thoughts

For those are the ones , who care enough to listen to them 

To tend to the hurt and despair caused by the thoughts 

And heal them and soothe it , their love is the healing balm 

Author's Note

A very personal write , hope you all can relate to it and like it !

Reviews

[no tell writer]

A word unspoken is a child needing attention ,
To cater to its needs and fend off detention
The detention of loneliness and just be heard
Hear me and my thoughts and heal the hurt

WOW!! to this whole write, so emotional. I loved these lines so much.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Thanks katzie , very personal write

[no tell writer]

no problem mine are too.

[Dwepuly]

This poem is so good I can't say anything negative about it! I have trouble critiquing poems for how short they are but here's my positives no negatives. The structure of the sentences is pleasing. It goes very slow, so its structure supports it's calm, soothing vibe. I like how you used the rhymes sparingly than other writers and when you did it gave it a punch needed. You're really good, so keep up the nice work!

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Thanks alot Dwepuly , i appreciate you reviewing this write

[Dwepuly]

No problem!

[Jimii]

Evocative and flowing. I liked the broken rhyming scheme and the importance of expressing conveyed in your piece.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Thanks Jimii !
Love Kathy

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

For being so young you truly are wise of heart and it reflects well in your writing. Very nice work Kathy. Continued success in your writing journey.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Thanks Carlos , wish you all the best in your poetic journey as well

[Chris Shaw]

A problem shared is a problem halved. To be able to share your thoughts, your words with another can certainly aid healing. A relatable poem. Has a universal theme at its core. Nicely conveyed Kathy.

Chris

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

That is certainly true , I am glad you liked it , thanks for dropping by chris !