Building Behind the Walls

Building Behind the Walls

A Poem by Awake.&.Unafraid
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Poem I wrote for English...the class seemed to really like it so I figured I'd share it here. It's kind of a fill-in-the-blank style where you're given the beggining of each line and you write the rest. Hope you like it :)

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I am building who I want to be.
I wonder at what I might become
I hear the whispers of possibility pulling me to the future
I see the hands reaching from the past, pulling me back
I want to be able to hold both my future and my past without one erasing the other
I am building who I want to be.
 
I pretend I am invincible
I feel like nothing will ever get through to hurt me
I touch the barriers, feeling safe and yet somehow, alone
I worry that one day these barriers will fall away
I cry on the days that no one seems to see my on the other side of these too-thick walls
I am building who I want to be.
 
I understand that I can make the walls fall down
I say I will let them fall and face the future
I dream of being outside of the barriers
I try to reach into the exterior and see what it would be like to be exposed
I hope one day the past and the future will meet, outside of all these walls
I am building who I want to be.

© 2009 Awake.&.Unafraid


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Added on April 24, 2009

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Awake.&.Unafraid
Awake.&.Unafraid

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